Chapter 2 has just been posted <— click on that link to read it.
Point deductions are unfair!
I think these point deductions are unfair! A good (meaning super bad, lol) villain can make or break a story. If our dearest MC, the cannon fodder villain were to embrace his villainy and take over the plot, I bet readers would love it! There shouldn’t be point deductions for complaints, pffft!!! Doesn’t 007 System know that negative feedback is just as important as positive feedback?
Anyway, I just finished chapter 2 and I hope you like it.